Today we're taking a look at an entry that caught me from the first line. It references death, and I'm a sucker for death/murder/mayhem in novels. So here goes!
[Interesting! I'm curious about this. Maybe you can introduce this part in the context of whatever is trying to kill your MC today.]
And there you have it, folks! What do you think, Secret Lifers? Do you agree with me? Or did I miss something? Comment below to add in your suggestions! And thanks to everyone who submitted this week. If we didn't get you this time, we'll try to catch you in our upcoming rounds.